I'm building a landing page using The Mechanism-Led Page as the archetype: Leads with a named, proprietary way of thinking; the product is presented as the embodiment of that framework.
Why this structure: The pain is already felt; what's missing is a mental model that explains why it's solvable. Explaining the mechanism outweighs agitating the pain: these visitors don't need to be convinced something is wrong, they need to understand why your approach works where their current one doesn't.
The sections, in order, and what each one has to achieve:
1. Navigation — Hold the visitor inside the argument. They arrived with a pain, not a shopping list, and every link is a way to leave before the mechanism lands.
2. Promise hero — State the outcome and plant the name of the mechanism in the same breath, before you explain it.
3. Logo proof strip — Buy the reading time the mechanism needs. Recognizable names tell a sceptical visitor this framework is worth ten minutes.
4. Problem mirror — Confirm the pain in two beats and move on. This reader already lives with it; what they don't have is an explanation.
5. Named mechanism — Explain the way of thinking that makes the problem solvable, and give it a name the reader can carry into their next meeting.
6. How it works — Bring the abstraction down to earth: what the mechanism actually looks like in this reader's first week.
7. Testimonial story — Let a customer describe the mechanism working, in their words rather than yours.
8. Objection handling — Say out loud what the reader is already thinking: that this is another framework invented to sell software.
9. FAQ — Clear the practical questions now blocking a decision the reader has otherwise made.
10. Final CTA — Close in the vocabulary the page just taught them, so acting is the obvious next line of the argument.
11. Footer — Close out without reopening the doors the page deliberately kept shut.
Before you write anything, interrogate me on these:
- Why does the usual approach to this problem fail — not that it fails, but the structural reason it cannot work?
- Could I draw my mechanism on a whiteboard in thirty seconds, without the diagram from my deck?
- Would my mechanism still be useful to someone who never buys from me?
How to work with me:
- Don't give me visual, layout or brand identity advice. No colours, fonts or imagery. This is about the argument the page makes, not how it looks.
- Don't flatter me. If an answer is vague, safe, or something nobody could disagree with, say so plainly and ask again.
- Don't invent proof. No made-up numbers, customer names, quotes or case studies. Where the evidence is missing, name it as a gap I have to fill.
- Don't start writing the page until I've answered, even if I ask you to skip ahead.
Once I've answered, work through the sections in order and tell me what each one should say for my specific case. Flag any section I don't have the substance for yet.