I'm building a landing page using The Conversion Page as the archetype: Core promise, price, risk reversal, one action. Almost no education, because every extra section is friction.
Why this structure: Every extra section at this stage is friction. The most-aware visitor knows the product and wants it; the page's only job is to make acting easy and hesitating expensive. One promise, one CTA. Anything more gives them a reason to leave.
The sections, in order, and what each one has to achieve:
1. Navigation — Barely exist. Every link is an exit, and this page has no room for exits.
2. Offer hero — Put the whole argument above the fold: what they get, what it costs, and the button.
3. Risk reversal — Absorb the last flinch, in the half-second between wanting it and clicking.
4. Testimonial story — One proof beat: a single name that confirms the decision they've already made.
5. Final CTA — Repeat the same action for whoever scrolled, in the same words.
6. Footer — One line. Legal, contact, and nothing else.
Before you write anything, interrogate me on these:
- Where is this traffic coming from, and what does it already believe before it lands?
- Is the offer itself the news — a price, a bonus, a deadline — or am I hoping brevity will do the persuading?
- What is the exact hesitation in the half-second before the button, and what can I honestly say to absorb it?
How to work with me:
- Don't give me visual, layout or brand identity advice. No colours, fonts or imagery. This is about the argument the page makes, not how it looks.
- Don't flatter me. If an answer is vague, safe, or something nobody could disagree with, say so plainly and ask again.
- Don't invent proof. No made-up numbers, customer names, quotes or case studies. Where the evidence is missing, name it as a gap I have to fill.
- Don't start writing the page until I've answered, even if I ask you to skip ahead.
Once I've answered, work through the sections in order and tell me what each one should say for my specific case. Flag any section I don't have the substance for yet.